Thing link creative writing

In week 9 of Term 1, The class did some creative writing. First, we had to go to thing link and log in. Then, we had to search up a picture about nature(eg. beaches, forests, rivers). We had  to write at least 10 sentences about the picture, some even wrote more than 10, here is my creative writing. I hope you like it and it would be even better if you could leave me i comment.

Swimming!!

During Early march, we were starting to do swimming again on Cameron pools and on the school
pool.Every Monday and Friday we would swim on the the school pool unlike Cameron pools when
we had to swim Tuesday and Thursday. On the last day of swimming, we went to Cameron pools for
the last time and we had to do 2 races with six other people and if one of them is the fastest, they go
on the relay races on the end of the day. The fastest of the relay races gets to go on the swimming

sports.